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Animal testing

Adverb sentence: or a start, If animals were used for vaccines that are for safety reasons for humans to use, I would go with it because of the safety reasons for humans to live and be safe around the community. It could save a life using a vaccine on an animal getting results to use the vaccine on a human. But also I think it should be certain animals that people don't own like rats, mice, any other animals that might be a pest or people don't like.

The W start sentence: While I can understand the animals may get hurt, it can save a human's life by testing the animal first to make sure it is okay to use the vaccine on a human.

The semicolon: I think everyone will be safe from being sick and getting viruses if the animals get tested before testing a human first that could get affected badly.

Very short sentence: Think about whose lives you could save from testing this on an animal.

Essay Writing Practice: SEXXYY Body Paragraphs

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Statement	Example/Evidence (include a quote)	EXplain quote	EXplain Effect on the Reader	Your link -- to another part of the text	Your link -- to the wider world
The incident of saran helped me to understand the important idea of  Prejudice Because it showed me how far king saran would go to tourture & zellie just because she is different to him.	We see this in the text when king saran helps to Saran says i admire your defiant child. It's impressive you've made it this far. But i wouldn't be during my job asking if i didn't remind you what you are.	This means that king saran is helping to admire saran what the child is doing and saran abusing his power and taking out his anger on her because of what happened to the family.	This made the reader feel quite bad for zelie because of saran abusing her powers.	It reminded me of another important part in the book because when saran kills amaris friend, called birta, this also shows the idea of.	In the real world, this idea is important because this is important to the wider world because of how you understand the real life story part of this,
Another way the incident of saran cutting the word maggot helped me to understand the important idea from the other perspective was because it shows us how vulnerable and helpless zelie is when saran is torturing her.	We see this in the text when...	This means that…	This made the reader feel________ because _________.	It reminded me of another important part in the book when __________, because this also shows the idea of __________.	In the real world, this idea is important because ___________.

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What did I like about learning from home? How could we possibly incorporate this at school

I liked when my house was quite quiet cause in school it gets too noisy and you can't focus properly.

What did you not like about learning from home?  That we didn't get to see our friends and  didn't get to go anyway except staying home.

What do you like about learning at school? That we get more time to sleep and that the house is quieter and easy to focus.

What do you not like about learning at school? That the noise gets a bit loud sometimes and people are unfocused.

When you are at school in classes, what percentage of the time would you say you are truly engaged? Paying attention & actively learning? For me i get distracted easy so about 55-60% but I can do as much work as i can without getting distracted only sometimes. I normally always pay attention to the teachers and make eye contact to show i'm not distracted.

Similes and metaphors

What is metaphor in my own words

A speech or a phrase

What is simile in my own words

Something that involves another thing but different kind