As soon as the holidays started I was very excited. We were going to Hamner Springs. we heard the car rumble tumble as we got out of bed. Mum, dad, my brother, sister and friends all got ready to go to Hamner Springs. First we got all our gear ready to go and we had to put the alarm on in case someone got in our house, my dogs had to stay home for a while. we had a lot of fun driving there and back. First off we got out of the car and got chicken to go over across the road. And we ate it there.
We all zoomed back to the pools to get changed into togs but we had to take them off straight away at the car so we could jump in earlier. we went to the hydro slides and, there was about 5 people to wait for in the line. Then we went in the cold pools and done bombs where is u go on your back and make a big bomb noise and it splashes up in the air and it is very loud. As soon as we were having fun we were on the hydro slides it was very dark inside the super bowl but when u get out of it is slightly sunny dark. We stayed at hamner for 3 hours, after that we went to a nice restaurant the joyful. What we got from the joyful was chicken corn soup, fried noodles, and sweet and sour pork. We had joyful for my birthday every one, turned up i knew in my family.After we had joyful we went back home, And lucky we got to stay up and play PS4 rugby league live. Me my friend played ps4 NRl he went broncos i went Melbourne storm. We downloaded the 2017 teams so there were more interesting teams warriors,broncos,storm,sharks,titans,knights,bulldogs,roosters,panthers,cowboys,tigers,eels,dragons,rabbitohs,sea eagles,raiders. Then we played against each other first try was scored by billy Slater the goat. After we had a game we turned it off and went to bed and waited for tomorrow to come for some more fun In the morning. We were asleep as soon as that.
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ReplyDeleteLogan, I like how you explained what you had for dinner and I also like how you said when you went to the pools you said what you went on an how you felt while you were on them I think that next time think that you should read over what you wrote because in some of your sentences I found it hard to read and use full words dont just put U put the full word as YOU
ReplyDeleteIt was a really awesome story but you need to re-read it so it will sound better. I really like the way you put interesting words in your story.
ReplyDeleteSup Logan, This is a really cool story,I like how you put in describing words to make it more interesting,You need to put full words not like u,A thoughtful would be put in correct punctuation in the right place other from that,Good Job👍🏽
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