Essay English

Quickly
Significantly
curiously'
Firstly
Importantly
Remarkably
Similarly
Surprisingly
Readily
curiously
concerningly



Firstly, we get our Chromebooks out
Importantly we get on with our work




At Hornby High, we are against bullying

Point: (State the point you want to make)
Martha is being bullied at school

Throughout the novel' Abomination Martha, is battled at school

E -Evidence


e.g
Throughout












E - Explain - link my evidence to my point - 2 sentences

e.g Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students towards Martha there was an imbalance of power between Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.



Committed to, the sport i play

While we were watching the experiment, the paper ignited.

While other people were talking, i carried on with my work

While i was watching



Wearing branded shoes!

Branded shoes are better then school shoes!

I think we should be wearing branded shoes at our school and not leather shoes. Why? because school shoes are ugly and they are not the right shoes to wear at school. Whereas, if we had to wear any shoes at school I would wear sports shoes because all the school shoes are uncomfortable and they can really hurt your feet. Forced to wear school shoes at school, our feet get sore playing basketball at interval and lunch. We have no other choice then wearing school shoes, So that's why i think its more important to wear branded shoes at School.

Title of your novel
Author of your novel - Robert swindells
Key argument/premise
Outline of essay


Surprised To see the class, Getting on with their work
Adverb
While others were talking, i didn't get distracted and i carried on with my work



One way that we see the character of Martha change in the text is when she makes friends with Scott. Before Scott started at her school, Martha had no friends and felt sad and isolated by her peers. Her classmates didn’t want to work with her, they moved away from her seat and wouldn’t share their equipment with her.  When Scott arrived, Martha hoped she might finally have someone to connect with. Luckily, Scott became her friend and Martha was able to open up and share with him about the abuse she was suffering at school and at home. This leads to Scott finding out about abomination- her nephew- living in the basement. This friendship is important to the text as a whole because if Martha hadn’t met Scott she wouldn’t have grown the confidence to stand up to her family and tell the secret of Abomination. Another way that her newly found confidence from Scott will help Martha is when she decides to stand up to the bullies at school. Surprised to see Martha is standing up for her self and she recognises that she actually doesn't have to worry about the bully's and she is willing to stand up to the bully's and her self. She is standing up to people that have been calling her names like a girl named Tracey stamper