Horror Camping Trip
Three young boys and I age of 13 & 14 named, Rykin, Michael, Austin & I had been camping. Three miles away from our car we decided to set up our camping set. We started a bomb fire and roast some marshmallows while we were sharing our scary stories, as the night got darker and darker all of us ran back to the car and the car was locked and we lost the keys. We were shaking and shaking because we were out camping with no one around and we didn't know what to do. When we went back to the bomb fire it was going and we hadn't put it out so it some of the trees started burning and we hadn't known what to do from their. We had called a fire man 5 minutes later the trees nearly fall down on us we ran back to the car and broke the windows we still didn't have the keys so we had to stay in the car waiting for the fire engine to come. The fire engines finally arrived the used all the water the could to put the fire out 10 minutes later the trees had been burnt down but we eventually put the fire out. We founded our keys that were in the tent and we went back to the car unlocked the doors and we headed back to our houses we were nearly home, on the way back we popped into McDonald's because we hadn't of eaten anything from the time we went camping. We finally got back home we went inside and we fall asleep straight away it was a GOODNIGHT FOR US.
Hello Logan, I really like the start of your story. Maybe next time try not to let it go of the page good work.
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